Chapter: Chapter 2 Page: Chief #2

7th May 2019, 8:24 PM

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Author Notes

7th May 2019, 8:24 PM Sorry this took so darn long—I was going through a little emotional trauma myself, heh. It’s kind of embarrassing when you think you’re way more mature than all your characters and then find yourself acting like them sometimes. ‘Guess ya just move forward anyways, amirite?

Yoshiko Tomada. Second in command. Chief makes the big decisions while Yoshi makes sure things get done. She can be a real pain.

Comments:

7th May 2019, 9:26 PM Poor Evan :(

So she'll be looking over their shoulders the whole time... that'll get annoying fast.
7th May 2019, 9:28 PM Especially for Kairo since he’s a double-agent and may be required to do sneaky stuff
7th May 2019, 9:40 PM "She'll be looking over their shoulders"

Unlikely, she's even shorter than Kairo.
7th May 2019, 10:01 PM She’d have to go on her tippy-toes!!
7th May 2019, 11:18 PM Woah I really like the details you put on this page especially the tone. Also something about it looks sharper than usual :)

Poor Evan! I don't know how I'd be after something like that. LOL Kairo's thoughts, each character's adding some color to the dynamic at least =D
7th May 2019, 11:40 PM Thank you! Idk why it might look sharper...I changed the wall colour slightly, and maybe the black lines stand out more against it.

I’m glad these characters seem to be working well together! Sometimes I’m not sure how to make the dialogue super interesting. And Ev’s probably acting better than I would be in his situation XD
8th May 2019, 12:02 AM * crying and hugging both of them *
8th May 2019, 1:10 AM *joins the group hug*
8th May 2019, 9:52 AM Hah, I couldn't deal with 5% of the crap that many fictional characters go through.
Us authors are so mean to characters we claim to love :')
8th May 2019, 2:25 PM Imagine if our characters met us and found out that we were responsible for all this heartbreak!!

*shudders*
9th May 2019, 3:43 PM Great detail :)
9th May 2019, 3:49 PM Thanks again! ; )
9th May 2019, 11:45 PM Aww I love the closeness between Kat and Evan. Poor kid he's been through so much!
10th May 2019, 12:09 AM I’m glad you can see how close they are! it’s probably one of the more important aspects of the story, even just in this first episode.

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