Chapter: Chapter 2 Page: One-Trick Pony

14th Jun 2019, 1:39 AM

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Author Notes

14th Jun 2019, 1:39 AM Sorry it’s a tad later—or at least I think it is, I haven’t been keeping the best track lol. This page was a real pain in some ways, as I’m trying to up my game with backgrounds. UGHHH. (I totally forgot about that weapons display by the door for the last few pages lmao). I’m sure I’ll get used to it and even enjoy it soon, but for now it’s kinda...yeah.

How is the dialogue btw? A lot of the time my dialogue is just thought up on the spot, as I have a rough idea of what they're gonna say in my head but don’t always figure everything out till the page is finished.

Comments:

14th Jun 2019, 1:45 AM lol one trick pony. I like that
14th Jun 2019, 1:50 AM GOOD, I thought it sounded dumb, but I didn’t wanna take up a whole bunch more space with something like: “You can’t just rely on...” yada yada yada.
14th Jun 2019, 2:03 AM I bet they weren't expecting this xD. "Are we about to do chores!?"

Great backgrounds and perspective! Really like the details you put on that weapons shelf, to the point of the glow on the lights above the AR. The dialogue's nice too imo, feels natural :)
14th Jun 2019, 2:36 AM Omgosh, YES! Evan be like only chores? phewf and Kat be like WHAT I AM WASTING MY LIFE

Aaaah someone noticed the glow! :’ D Thank you!
14th Jun 2019, 4:01 AM I laughed at the "one-trick pony" part.
14th Jun 2019, 4:08 AM Hah! And when I try to be funny...lol! Thanks man
14th Jun 2019, 4:52 AM Is Evan Jewish? Why does he have a Star of David hoodie?
14th Jun 2019, 2:01 PM He’s not strictly Jewish or anything, more like a Christian but TBH I just think the star looks cool ; )
14th Jun 2019, 4:56 AM "First, I must teach your kung fu. Then, fencing!"
14th Jun 2019, 2:03 PM Wow you are too good at guessing XD
15th Jun 2019, 7:47 AM Dialogue's fine. I always script mine beforehand, but then when making the actual page I realize some of it sounds unnatural so I change it up. Your approach sounds interesting because if done well it also leads to natural, non-forced dialogue.

Also, nice new banner! Still surreal/funny to see the "S&B" acronym used by someone else, because it feels like "mine" even though I obviously don't (and shouldn't) have a monopoly on it. :P
15th Jun 2019, 5:01 PM Thanks, I hope so! For very important scenes I sometimes write it out or know exactly what they’re gonna say beforehand, but even the sometimes it changes right before the page is released lol.

Believe me I only wrote S&B because there wasn’t room for the whole title! But I have no prob with two awesome S&B duos. It would be funny if they had a crossover

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