Chapter: Chapter 2 Page: Ouch

5th Aug 2019, 3:14 AM

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5th Aug 2019, 3:14 AM Heya! I’m uploading from a hotel today ;) Idk what to call this sort of “fight mode” Evan has—also he can’t talk when he’s in this mode, in fact, he’s actually barely conscious of what he’s doing. This is my first serious action scene—I hope I can learn some things from it.

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5th Aug 2019, 4:14 AM Ohh love the action focus of this page. First panel's really striking! I like how he gets into it so much that he isn't very conscious, it's a great contrast with his normal personality :)

"Um..didn't know this kid would be this good." XD
5th Aug 2019, 4:38 AM Cool! I’m glad it seems to work well with this character.

He probably has never had anyone actually get a good hit in a really long time, this is pretty shocking to him ;)
5th Aug 2019, 4:45 AM Can't block what you can't touch!
5th Aug 2019, 5:01 AM Ya darn straight!
5th Aug 2019, 6:25 AM Now he's almost literally kicking butt!
5th Aug 2019, 4:06 PM Ha, pretty close!
7th Aug 2019, 4:26 PM Ahh... Wait, so he copies what he learned when conscious. But in fight mode, he's kinda(?) unconscious but executes the moves perfectly?
7th Aug 2019, 4:56 PM Yea pretty much! Evan’s brain is like a computer. It stores up anything he might need, and all that info acts like a reflex when he feels threatened, and he was raised to be pretty paranoid, so...
29th Feb 2020, 1:53 AM Dang, son! Slow down there XD
7th Apr 2020, 4:38 AM He would make an unstoppable grandmaster someday with that Intangible ability.
7th Apr 2020, 11:06 AM I’ll bet!!

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