Sunstrike and Bluemist: An Origin Story

Chapter: A Sister’s Brother and a Mother’s Son.
Page: What’s the Matter?

_{1st Feb 2020, 5:00 PM}

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ShaRose49

1st Feb 2020, 5:00 PM It’s not like that fall hurt much, since they’re doing this on a mat...

If that pose looks awkward, that’s because it is—I was really reminded about how there’s always lots more to learn about anatomy and natural-looking poses this week : / I also updated Yoshi’s design recently, cause I thought it was really meh. I wanna do that to Chief’s design as well but all in good time :3

Also this weird drawing happened this week:

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Danny McLimmon

1st Feb 2020, 7:30 PM I don't think that pose looks very awkward (I assume you mean the one where Kat is getting slammed to the ground). Since you pointed it out, I guess I can see that the upper part of her body is at a slightly different angle than the lower part, but to me it just looks like her body is being twisted due to the way Kairo is leading her arm.

Still, it's good that you're always looking for ways you can improve.

ShaRose49

1st Feb 2020, 8:57 PM Thanks, and yeah, I think that’s always good. I also noticed recently that her sweater-sleeves are flopping in the opposite direction they should be—they should be doing what her hair is doing XD but that sweater was drawn as a quick afterthought since I initially forgot that she was wearing it. Hopefully I’ll think twice about that next time, but don’t worry I’m not beating myself up I’m just aware is all.

Sovember

1st Feb 2020, 11:41 PM I mess up physics sooo much, don't feel alone on that xD.

ShaRose49

1st Feb 2020, 11:54 PM Haha good to know ;)

TheD-Wrek

1st Feb 2020, 8:16 PM I think the pose looks fine. We're always our own worst critic. Looking forward to the next page.

P.S. - Cute mouse. :3

ShaRose49

1st Feb 2020, 9:02 PM Aw I’m so glad you’re looking forward to it! And thanks <3

Sovember

1st Feb 2020, 11:40 PM Dang he's not holding back, but neither will the enemy I suppose! Haha Kat looks great as a mouse character, like a saturday morning cartoon! x)

I can't help but update designs too, sometimes you just get the itch.

ShaRose49

2nd Feb 2020, 12:00 AM Yep he’s just preparing her for what she may face—or at least he’s helping her learn to get back up. Yoshi’s design is meant to add a more interesting contrast to her character instead of something too predictable. Just cause she’s strict and professional doesn’t mean that she can’t have any little quirks about her.

Thanks, I based it off of the Geronimo Stilton animated series :3

Kevtrev

2nd Feb 2020, 4:53 AM Agh I know what you mean, drawings rarely come out the way you want them to, even when you've had a lifetime of practice. I see no problems here though!

ShaRose49

2nd Feb 2020, 8:38 AM Well, thanks :3 I’m feeling pretty stupid right now, but I’ll keep improving.