Chapter: Part of the Circle
Page: Second Thoughts

3rd Jul 2021, 12:00 PM

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3rd Jul 2021, 12:00 PM Me love pink gradients. And look, I can do a page with no dialogue Ma!

I used my sketchbook and borrowed my family’s iPad to make this page, since at the time of writing this my iPad (was) still not back from the repair shop. If anything looks inconsistent it’s probably because I was a little more limited and all over the place than I usually am hehe


3rd Jul 2021, 12:42 PM Poor girl... I wonder what happened to her :'D
I like this effect you're using for the storytelling flashback! :3
3rd Jul 2021, 1:19 PM We'll definitely know more about the bad guys in chapter 5!

And thanks! :3
3rd Jul 2021, 3:20 PM Well I'm glad THAT didn't happen to me when I got jabbed by a needle today (vaccine XD)

That suitcase better contain something reeeeeeeeeeeally amazing for that to have been worth it. Watch it not even be money but like, a frog or something :P
3rd Jul 2021, 3:57 PM Oof yeah XD

It’s probably just money—I doubt he feels like it was worth it now though :(
3rd Jul 2021, 4:47 PM Great use of no dialogue! Felt like a movie haha, Really tense page...

Poor girl, I'm looking forward to what you're building up to :)
3rd Jul 2021, 5:38 PM Aw that is awesome, thanks!

Yeah (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞ at least not all hope is lost!
3rd Jul 2021, 10:11 PM Hope that money was worth it for that guy.
3rd Jul 2021, 10:14 PM I for one, don’t! But I mean maybe he really needed it, so it’s not like I don’t feel a little bit sorry for him, but this is crossing the line big time. In his defense, it seems like he wasn’t fully aware of what these people were going to do to her until now.
4th Jul 2021, 1:25 PM Perhaps in a hypothetical spinoff, one could explore his reaction to his realization; would he call the Popo with an anonymous tip or keep his mouth shut? But I figure this story will focus on your Canadian X-Men, not the X-tras (bad pun yeah). Fun fact, there is a story out there about Extras.
4th Jul 2021, 2:45 PM Haha good one XD and that:s also a cool idea! And yeah I’m aware of The Extras, the creator is very nice. <3
4th Jul 2021, 6:48 PM Interesting; I'm in her Discord server (want to join?). She even lets us use her (historical) extras from Extra as our extras; you might've recognized one depending on what pages you were able to see in the forums.
4th Jul 2021, 8:15 PM I don’t really use discord at the moment, but thank you, and that is cool! ;)
4th Jul 2021, 12:09 AM Now the boy's got to live with this guilt for the rest of his life. It feels like the setup to a story; I could see the boy as a world-weary loner type in a film noir, who's telling us of the mistake that haunts him every day which led him to devote his life to stopping mutant kidnappers.
4th Jul 2021, 8:34 AM Ohmigosh yes! I’d love to imagine something like that coming out of this, and who knows? It’s supposed to be open to interpretation :)
4th Jul 2021, 1:19 PM pink is great! sadly, the yellow surprise lines in the first panel got kinda lost in the gradient :/

I like the pixel noise texture too.

and happy belated Canada day
4th Jul 2021, 1:24 PM Hey thanks! And ooh yeah, I totally forgot about those surprise lines, I probably should have used black or something. Next time, maybe!

Thanks a bunch! :D
6th Jul 2021, 9:30 AM I felt that needle in the neck :O
6th Jul 2021, 10:14 AM Oof, yeah I bet that would be nasty Σ(°△°|||)︴
8th Jul 2021, 12:53 PM OH NO

No one is happy in this exchange dang. D:

I love how you drew the first panel, the terror is real.
8th Jul 2021, 1:16 PM Yeah (ʘᗩʘ’)
Thanks yo!!
13th Oct 2021, 11:55 PM The fact that the sellout was trembling is chilling, Judas vibes...
14th Oct 2021, 4:17 PM That’s a great analogy, wow! : o