9th Oct 2021, 12:00 PMThis short moment with Kat and Evan after Kairo’s questionnaire was actually added at the last minute. I realized that for a relationship as important as theirs, I need to try to make sure it gets proper set-up and payoff.
If we’re going to truly understand why Evan clings to Kat so much even though his nature is to push people away, I need to show that.
10th Oct 2021, 2:38 PMThis short scene says a lot about the loving relationship between Kat and Evan. These two really are my favorites.
Off subject entirely, feel free to skip: I'm so glad you did a youtube video on Jungle Juice. I've really become addicted to it since I started reading thanks to your video. The above scene reminded be of one from JJ where a smiling Huijin says, "Suchan, Did you sleep with Dowha? Choose your words wisely." There's no logical connection between the two, just my weird brain. I'll quit because I'm rambling now.
10th Oct 2021, 2:52 PMAw, that makes me so happy UwU thank you!
And hey, thanks for mentioning that vid, I really enjoy creating content on YouTube. Talking about other stories makes the world seem so much bigger and yet closer, there are so many wonderful things to enjoy made by passionate people <3
And lmao poor Suchan on that scene (T▽T) I really like how they’re taking the time to give a bit of development to every character, like Dohwa and now Hyesong, and even some of the villains! It really makes me even more invested, it’s such a fun read that’s admittedly really hard to put down ;)
9th Oct 2021, 2:53 PMPHEW they're getting a chance to talk before Evan can run off. Good! XD
I don't know if you did anything different but I feel like the art looks more detailed than usual? Especially the first panel stands out to me.
(Side note, the text at the top, "Chapter: Part of the Circle Page: Kind Eyes", that reads a bit confusing, as if it's all one long title instead of two)
Hmm interesting, thank you! It might be because it’s mostly close-ups? I’ll have to compare it to the next few pages to be sure though, I wonder if some days I think about details more than others.
Right?? I’m not sure how to fix that, I think all the pages read like that. I still want the pages to have individual names instead of numbers though, so they’re easier to reference later.
9th Oct 2021, 4:14 PMComparing to previous pages I think it's because we haven't seen Kat in a while and she has brighter hair than Evan and Kairo, so the detail in it is more noticeable.
Yeah there's probably someplace in the website coding where you can make the page title appear below the chapter title (maybe typing a simple <br/> in between them?)
9th Oct 2021, 5:54 PMYeah, she definitely is a contrast for sure.
Sure, I can try that! (I know almost nothing about coding lol, the only coding I’ve done for this site is copying and pasting stuff given to me by the awesome people who do know that stuff on CF!)
15th Oct 2021, 4:26 AMShe sure does! I think some people kind of like her exist, they’ve been through hell and back though to get to where they are at now. That kind of strength doesn’t come cheap!
24th Oct 2021, 2:18 PMPoor Evan! But so lucky to have someone like Kat who's sensitive to his trauma and emotions :) . Really great emotions and coloring here btw! I like Evan's shy look away in the first panel
24th Oct 2021, 6:30 PMYeah, I think she’s all that keeps him from losing it at the moment. Having someone like her in your life is priceless, so I’m really grateful for some of the people in my life <3
Thank you so much, I actually really like how the colours of this page go with the site’s colours!
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If we’re going to truly understand why Evan clings to Kat so much even though his nature is to push people away, I need to show that.